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"[I] wanted to thank you for your comments - I agree with you almost a hundred percent on all your issues. The draft you read was my page one rewrite designed to satisfy the development notes of a producer at Sony who liked the idea but wanted more conventional thriller elements added. You hit the nail on the head with your comment about Hollywood taking interesting ideas and filtering them down through conventional 'movie' devices."--Paul

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Below you will find a list of our services and prices. You may select any combination of services you prefer, simply clicking on the PayPal "Add to Cart" buttons, or you may send a check to the address on the HOW TO SUBMIT page. We recommend PayPal if you are submitting your script electronically and are eager for work to start as quickly as possible; however, if you are mailing a hard copy of your script, it makes more sense to simply enclose a check.

If you do not see what you want listed below, or if you have special requirements, do not hesitate to phone or fax us at 818-766-7822. Or you can send us an e-mail.


BASIC SERVICE
(Required)

This is the starting point for all our coverage - the basic flat fee for analyzing a screenplay under 130 pages (longer scripts are negotiable). Unless you are submitting a treatment, all analysis must include this service.

Cost of Basic Service is $50. 


PHONE CONSULTATION

We will provide our coverage in whatever form suits you best, general analsis, page-by-page notes, etc. Perhaps you would prefer to discuss your script; if so, take advantage of this option. We especially recommend phone consultations if you have specific questions or problems you would like to discuss.

Cost for Phone Consultation is $20


GENERAL ANALYSIS

General Analysis provides a one-page overview of your screenplay, noting potential problem areas (if any). If you are reasonably happy with your script, and are only seeking a second opinion to make sure you have not overlooked anything, then this may be the feedback you need. 

Cost of General Analysis is $25.00.


DETAILED ANALYSIS

The General Analysis is a great way to get a second opinion and find out what kind of reaction your screenplay will probably generate when submitted for consideration. If you want to delve into specifics or if you are anticipating a substantial re-write, you may want our Detailed Coverage, which provides four pages of analysis. You will get specific comments that examine your script in terms of Premise, Plot Structure, Characterization, and Dialogue, and Writing Style. You will learn where the strengths and weaknesses are, and get advice on where to focus your efforts during the revision process.

Cost for Detailed Analysis is $100


SCENE-SPECIFIC NOTES

The Detailed Analysis will pinpoint problem areas that need to be addressed in your screenplay. However, if you prefer more Scene-Specific details, then consider this option, which provides page-by-page notes, citing examples of action, dialogue, and description. We recommend this service as a stand-alone option or in conjunction with a Phone Consultation or General Analysis. (We will provide both Scene-Specific Notes and Detailed Analysis if you request, but this is more coverage than most writers need.)

Cost for Scene-Specific Notes is $50


PROOFREADING

If you believe your screenplay is almost ready to go out, you want to make sure that there are no embarassing typographical, grammatical, or spelling errors. We recommend this service if you are contemplating sending your script out "as is." If you anticipate extensive rewriting, it is probably better not to worry about typos at this point. 

Cost for Proofreading your screenplay is $25.


FOLLOW-UP SESSION

If you have any questions our coverage, we will answer them free of charge. However, if you would like to follow-up the coverage with an additional discussion about how to address the concerns raised, we will provide additional notes and analysis based on your reaction to our coverage. This option is useful if you are contemplating possible revisions and want to make sure they address the issues raised in the coverage. We can provide this additional coverage in the form of written notes, but we also recommend a Phone Consultation as a possible option. Either way, we will give you the help you need on how to polish your script to perfection. 

Cost for Written Follow-Up is $25. (Phone Consultation price is listed above.) 


RESUBMISSIONS

After your script has been analyzed and you have made revisions, you may wish to submit the revised draft to ensure that you have addressed all the problems noted in our previous coverage. For resubmitted scripts, we provide Basic Service and General Analysis (one page of notes) for a reduced price: $60.


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